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Gamey DJ
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PostSubject: The rhyming thread.   Mon Jun 16, 2014 10:57 am

Like a normal thread
but with one rule.
Those who speak
must not be a fool.

You must rhyme to
keep the flow goin.
but the topic is
somethin no one knowin.

so to start off lets talk
about the various weather
yours may be windy or cool,
but mine gently blows a feather.
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Johnny64



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PostSubject: Re: The rhyming thread.   Mon Jun 16, 2014 11:09 am

My weather is hot
Hot like a coffee
And i hate this heat
like if it was a bad beat

Did i rhyme correctly
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Gamey DJ
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PostSubject: Re: The rhyming thread.   Mon Jun 16, 2014 11:27 am

Your rhyming is good
Nothing bad to say,
but making the two last stanzas rhyme
is somewhat recalled as "cray cray".

Can you see how I rhyme?
It's every two stanzas end with the same
There are many different ways to rhyme,
but, hey, I ain't gonna blame.
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MercuryHg34



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PostSubject: Re: The rhyming thread.   Mon Jun 16, 2014 12:02 pm

So basically line A
Then add line B
Another A or a C
Then B again you see

But as much as I like rhyming
My favorite scheme's Haiku
Alas, this is Gamey's thread
The rules are up to you.
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C_Mill24
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PostSubject: Re: The rhyming thread.   Mon Jun 16, 2014 12:08 pm

My name is Cory

And this is my story

Two times Two equals foury

...
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Gamey DJ
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PostSubject: Re: The rhyming thread.   Mon Jun 16, 2014 12:14 pm

(@ Mercury)
There, thats what I meant.
Its only a matter of skill.
And once you get it,
Then everyone will.

I'll try to stick with this.
And not cheat secretly,
but unlike SP's roster,
I'll update this frequently.

(Plus, there can be Rhyme battles.)
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Slissith



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PostSubject: Re: The rhyming thread.   Mon Jun 16, 2014 12:43 pm

About time someone made a rhyming thread
The hip hopping rap spirit is never dead
Watch me spit up a hot verse easily
Not unlike Giga who sprited Ridley

Because spirit is what this is about
Passion is the fuel for us all
Here's hoping we end creative drought
I'll do my best, but I'm no rap god

Cmill my man
2 squared equals 2 times 2
2 rhymes 2 equals E=MC squared dude
I came to solve for x and rhyme
and x equals nine

Mercury is a chemical element
with the symbol Hg
it is used in thermometers
and has a freezing point of −38.83 °C degrees

Gamey I thank you for this thread
Tiesto would be proud for this fellow DJ
Keep updating this gem
Did I mention rhyming is great?


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Cobra Bubbles wrote:
Your expectations were too simple and downright stupid.
I mean really? "No character will have their testicles hang out"?
Thanks to you, I had to add two new rules.

VultureDuck wrote:
Crusade is a man's game

Jaklub wrote:
Post count ain't gonna raise itself.

Jaklub wrote:
this count down won't be uploaded to youtube, better enjoy it now.

Lego_Shaq wrote:
please dont think im actually racist

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Gamey DJ
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PostSubject: Re: The rhyming thread.   Mon Jun 16, 2014 1:11 pm

That's very nice sliss,
but plz get with our program.
We are talking about high temps
not any arithmetic low gram.

But I do say nice use
of your complex vocabulary
it is very joyful and
full of sweetness like a juicy berry.

Im aware i said the topic would change
but breaking down people so theres something to rearrange?
this type of rhyming is extremely strange.
so try my style of rhythm, there might be something in exchange.
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Dry



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PostSubject: Re: The rhyming thread.   Mon Jun 16, 2014 2:23 pm

The problem I think is rhythm.
Rappers tend to flow into
their next line, without the
slightest hint of schism.

And no single rhyme scheme
is used, they follow the theme
and if it doesn't flow they
fall apart at the seams.

The lines in this thread
all have differing lengths,
and that sucks, even if
the vocab is its strength.

Still, I like what you've
done here,
it's nice and easy and fun
so its future is clear.
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Dr. CanadianBacon
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PostSubject: Re: The rhyming thread.   Mon Jun 16, 2014 2:29 pm

Rhyming thread?
more like Rhyming Bread!
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Slissith



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PostSubject: Re: The rhyming thread.   Mon Jun 16, 2014 3:03 pm

Yes indeed now I see
I stand corrected mrD
indeed
rhythm is the key
it's all we need

perhaps I should try
to change my ways
become dope like dry
end my newbie days
I should try


King, give me strength
rhymes to the tenth
I wanna be the very best
the Gary motherf****ng, yes
oak n' pine
forest rhyme
our minds fortify
palisades so bright
Doctor dry

it's you turn
take the chance

don't pass up
don't choke
let your self
manifest
don't rest
be the best

_________________
Cobra Bubbles wrote:
Your expectations were too simple and downright stupid.
I mean really? "No character will have their testicles hang out"?
Thanks to you, I had to add two new rules.

VultureDuck wrote:
Crusade is a man's game

Jaklub wrote:
Post count ain't gonna raise itself.

Jaklub wrote:
this count down won't be uploaded to youtube, better enjoy it now.

Lego_Shaq wrote:
please dont think im actually racist

SmashBros._L0ver wrote:
fuck you slissith go to hell Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad
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Johnny64



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PostSubject: Re: The rhyming thread.   Mon Jun 16, 2014 8:33 pm

Sup, bro's,
i came to make some lyrics
hey boys,
do you like these parties?

I know,
i rhyme like a dagger
cut now,
then leave a mark after

Did i rap battle correctly
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Doqtor Kirby
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PostSubject: Re: The rhyming thread.   Mon Jun 16, 2014 9:57 pm

ah hem

Ok I'm back,
jack
Don't mess with me, I hack.
No not that hack as in breakin lacks or breakin backs or breakin rats!
I have a unique style
The style that I posess is kinda wild
But don't be afraid of my 8 mile
Run. But don't run. Mind blowing percentile.
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Gamey DJ
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PostSubject: Re: The rhyming thread.   Mon Jun 16, 2014 10:00 pm

@johnny
I dont know lemme ask my mom.
She says you did alright,
but she also would like to meet you
and wonders if your white. (wtf mom)
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Johnny64



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PostSubject: Re: The rhyming thread.   Mon Jun 16, 2014 10:05 pm

@Gamey DJ
Well, i do am white
but why she wanna know that?
i would meet her
but im way too far
(no disrespect)
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Gamey DJ
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PostSubject: Re: The rhyming thread.   Mon Jun 16, 2014 10:16 pm

I dont know, but
she does get around a lot
sorry if this offends
but i thinks she thinks ur hot?

WOA WOA DONT RESPOND
THIS IS A JOKE,
but its not like your
into banging old folk.

Or maybe you are
its not my decision
by the way kirbs
ur rappin is like a vision
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Johnny64



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PostSubject: Re: The rhyming thread.   Thu Jun 19, 2014 2:08 pm

Reviving dem thread
something I do
Gamey Dee-Jay
you should do it too!

By the way
Thanks for the compliment?
I don't know what was that
but i'll take that comment

I don't like bangin
but i will say standin
thanks for the offer
but you shouldn't bother
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Gamey DJ
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PostSubject: Re: The rhyming thread.   Thu Jun 19, 2014 3:38 pm

Wow, this topic has fallen
and it can't get up.
This place is more empty
than the country with the world cup.

We need something to spice it up.
Something with pizzazz.
How about a little rap competition
or commonly known as..

A rap battle. Yeah.
This could be a lot of fun.
Someone with vocab. skills,
please show how its done.

(Yeah im pretty much getting desperate at this point Neutral )
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Slissith



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PostSubject: Re: The rhyming thread.   Thu Jun 19, 2014 4:16 pm



Ya called?
I hear y'all
this could be a lot of fun
Disturbing I find your of flow lack

Call me yoda second
eminem echo
montoya ini-go

You didn't kill my father
not my mother
yet I'm gonna bring you down
half a round
no doubt

Here's a hot verse
why don't you choke on the truth
John will not save you
expect no truce

I'm like Voldemort
after me you'll rot
use my wand
kill a rat
RATATATATAT

and so the story goes
I buried a body
no shame though
you crossed me
buddy

_________________
Cobra Bubbles wrote:
Your expectations were too simple and downright stupid.
I mean really? "No character will have their testicles hang out"?
Thanks to you, I had to add two new rules.

VultureDuck wrote:
Crusade is a man's game

Jaklub wrote:
Post count ain't gonna raise itself.

Jaklub wrote:
this count down won't be uploaded to youtube, better enjoy it now.

Lego_Shaq wrote:
please dont think im actually racist

SmashBros._L0ver wrote:
fuck you slissith go to hell Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad
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SP



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PostSubject: Re: The rhyming thread.   Thu Jun 19, 2014 6:08 pm

Gamey, I cannot update my roster,
for my computer is at home, not with me you see
so while you guys are here to prosper,
I sit and type this on my phone while I pee
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Gamey DJ
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PostSubject: Re: The rhyming thread.   Thu Jun 19, 2014 6:53 pm

Yo SP then heres my apology.
I now feel bad for my actions.
I will cry in the corner of walmart
and watch people's reactions.
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