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OmegaSteve777 Level 8 CPU
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| Subject: Steve Makes a Comic Sun Jul 16, 2017 9:21 pm | |
| Hi
Um
I made a comic and I'd appreciate if you would look at it. It's about some kids doing things in school. It should be a good time. They're up on DeviantArt, and I'll link the first three pages here. They'll be up in "episodes" so basically when one part is up, the next 1-3 pages are up too. Criticism is appreciated. (What to look out for, what I'm doing wrong etc.) I think that's all I need to say. Here are the links: Page 1: http://omegasteve777.deviantart.com/art/Social-Studies-Pilot-1-1-693007995 Page 2: http://omegasteve777.deviantart.com/art/Social-Studies-Pilot-1-2-693009045 Page 3: http://omegasteve777.deviantart.com/art/Social-Studies-Pilot-1-3-693009276
Please look I spent almost a month making this. |
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SP
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| Subject: Re: Steve Makes a Comic Tue Jul 18, 2017 7:53 pm | |
| Pretty enjoyable overall, quite nice that you can tell the characters apart for the most part despite the lack of color. Artstyle is also fairly consistent which I do appreciate.
Are you trying to go for a more story-driven comic, or just something humorous and episodic? |
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OmegaSteve777 Level 8 CPU
1750
| Subject: Re: Steve Makes a Comic Tue Jul 18, 2017 10:21 pm | |
| - SP wrote:
- Pretty enjoyable overall, quite nice that you can tell the characters apart for the most part despite the lack of color. Artstyle is also fairly consistent which I do appreciate.
Are you trying to go for a more story-driven comic, or just something humorous and episodic? Somebody actually responded? Exciting! I'm glad that you pointed it out! I try to make my characters look as different as possible (which is weird because I put them all in uniform). I'm glad you are enjoying it. For the most part it's going to be more based around humor. It will be episodic but there will be a little bit of continuity going through. |
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Slissith
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| Subject: Re: Steve Makes a Comic Wed Jul 19, 2017 1:39 am | |
| Very enjoyable. The characters are distinguishable both in appearance and behavior. Honestly, SP said most of what had to be said. But I'd like to add that I thought it was actually funny (made me chuckle more than once) and sorta reminds me of Don Rosa (look him up if you are not familiar with his works).
This has potential. Make more! |
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OmegaSteve777 Level 8 CPU
1750
| Subject: Re: Steve Makes a Comic Wed Jul 19, 2017 11:38 am | |
| - Slissith wrote:
- Very enjoyable. The characters are distinguishable both in appearance and behavior. Honestly, SP said most of what had to be said. But I'd like to add that I thought it was actually funny (made me chuckle more than once) and sorta reminds me of Don Rosa (look him up if you are not familiar with his works).
This has potential. Make more! I'm glad I'm making people laugh! Episode 2 is already in the works. I'm just a bit worried about when school starts again... Oh well! |
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OmegaSteve777 Level 8 CPU
1750
| Subject: Re: Steve Makes a Comic Sat Jul 29, 2017 1:14 am | |
| Episode 2 is finished! It took way less time this time, thank goodness.
Page 1: http://omegasteve777.deviantart.com/art/Social-Studies-The-Group-Project-2-1-695478512 Page 2: http://omegasteve777.deviantart.com/art/Social-Studies-The-Group-Project-2-2-695478919 |
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King Proto Level 5 CPU
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| Subject: Re: Steve Makes a Comic Fri Aug 04, 2017 6:32 pm | |
| Wow Steve, after reading these excellent comics, I can say that you have great potential as they were very entertaining to read. Also I was looking at your artwork and they too are very simple yet fun to look at. I LOVE the one of Nago and Kirby. |
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OmegaSteve777 Level 8 CPU
1750
| Subject: Re: Steve Makes a Comic Fri Aug 04, 2017 7:34 pm | |
| - King Proto wrote:
- Wow Steve, after reading these excellent comics, I can say that you have great potential as they were very entertaining to read. Also I was looking at your artwork and they too are very simple yet fun to look at. I LOVE the one of Nago and Kirby.
Thank you! I really like when people enjoy my work. It's good to know that all my time was not for nothing. (The first episode took a whole frigging month) Also I do try to draw something everyday, so maybe follow me? Also I might do more of the Drawing over sprite things in the future, but for now I just want to go back to what I was doing when I first started . |
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OmegaSteve777 Level 8 CPU
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| Subject: Re: Steve Makes a Comic Sun Aug 20, 2017 12:31 am | |
| Episode 3, "Lunch-Time Stories," is out and ready for reading!
I also put all of the pages and shorts in a folder for convenience. It's right here: https://omegasteve777.deviantart.com/art/Social-Studies-Lunch-Time-Stories-3-1-699862117 |
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OmegaSteve777 Level 8 CPU
1750
| Subject: Re: Steve Makes a Comic Sun Oct 01, 2017 1:55 am | |
| Episode 4 is now finished! Please take some time to read this I've spent a month on this one.
Page 1: https://omegasteve777.deviantart.com/art/Social-Studies-The-Great-Pizza-War-4-1-705567259 Page 2: https://omegasteve777.deviantart.com/art/Social-Studies-The-Great-Pizza-War-4-2-706281797 Page 3: https://omegasteve777.deviantart.com/art/Social-Studies-The-Great-Pizza-War-4-3-707308314 |
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