Subject: The rhyming thread. Mon Jun 16, 2014 10:57 am
Like a normal thread but with one rule. Those who speak must not be a fool.
You must rhyme to keep the flow goin. but the topic is somethin no one knowin.
so to start off lets talk about the various weather yours may be windy or cool, but mine gently blows a feather.
Johnny64
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Subject: Re: The rhyming thread. Mon Jun 16, 2014 11:09 am
My weather is hot Hot like a coffee And i hate this heat like if it was a bad beat
Did i rhyme correctly
Gamey DJ Level 6 CPU
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Subject: Re: The rhyming thread. Mon Jun 16, 2014 11:27 am
Your rhyming is good Nothing bad to say, but making the two last stanzas rhyme is somewhat recalled as "cray cray".
Can you see how I rhyme? It's every two stanzas end with the same There are many different ways to rhyme, but, hey, I ain't gonna blame.
MercuryHg34
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Subject: Re: The rhyming thread. Mon Jun 16, 2014 12:02 pm
So basically line A Then add line B Another A or a C Then B again you see
But as much as I like rhyming My favorite scheme's Haiku Alas, this is Gamey's thread The rules are up to you.
C_Mill24 Level 9 CPU
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Subject: Re: The rhyming thread. Mon Jun 16, 2014 12:08 pm
My name is Cory
And this is my story
Two times Two equals foury
...
Gamey DJ Level 6 CPU
705 nah
Subject: Re: The rhyming thread. Mon Jun 16, 2014 12:14 pm
(@ Mercury) There, thats what I meant. Its only a matter of skill. And once you get it, Then everyone will.
I'll try to stick with this. And not cheat secretly, but unlike SP's roster, I'll update this frequently.
(Plus, there can be Rhyme battles.)
Slissith
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Subject: Re: The rhyming thread. Mon Jun 16, 2014 12:43 pm
About time someone made a rhyming thread The hip hopping rap spirit is never dead Watch me spit up a hot verse easily Not unlike Giga who sprited Ridley
Because spirit is what this is about Passion is the fuel for us all Here's hoping we end creative drought I'll do my best, but I'm no rap god
Cmill my man 2 squared equals 2 times 2 2 rhymes 2 equals E=MC squared dude I came to solve for x and rhyme and x equals nine
Mercury is a chemical element with the symbol Hg it is used in thermometers and has a freezing point of −38.83 °C degrees
Gamey I thank you for this thread Tiesto would be proud for this fellow DJ Keep updating this gem Did I mention rhyming is great?
Gamey DJ Level 6 CPU
705 nah
Subject: Re: The rhyming thread. Mon Jun 16, 2014 1:11 pm
That's very nice sliss, but plz get with our program. We are talking about high temps not any arithmetic low gram.
But I do say nice use of your complex vocabulary it is very joyful and full of sweetness like a juicy berry.
Im aware i said the topic would change but breaking down people so theres something to rearrange? this type of rhyming is extremely strange. so try my style of rhythm, there might be something in exchange.
Dry
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Subject: Re: The rhyming thread. Mon Jun 16, 2014 2:23 pm
The problem I think is rhythm. Rappers tend to flow into their next line, without the slightest hint of schism.
And no single rhyme scheme is used, they follow the theme and if it doesn't flow they fall apart at the seams.
The lines in this thread all have differing lengths, and that sucks, even if the vocab is its strength.
Still, I like what you've done here, it's nice and easy and fun so its future is clear.
Dr. CanadianBacon Level 6 CPU
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Subject: Re: The rhyming thread. Mon Jun 16, 2014 2:29 pm
Rhyming thread? more like Rhyming Bread!
Slissith
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Subject: Re: The rhyming thread. Mon Jun 16, 2014 3:03 pm
Yes indeed now I see I stand corrected mrD indeed rhythm is the key it's all we need
perhaps I should try to change my ways become dope like dry end my newbie days I should try
King, give me strength rhymes to the tenth I wanna be the very best the Gary motherf****ng, yes oak n' pine forest rhyme our minds fortify palisades so bright Doctor dry
it's you turn take the chance
don't pass up don't choke let your self manifest don't rest be the best
Johnny64
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Subject: Re: The rhyming thread. Mon Jun 16, 2014 8:33 pm
Sup, bro's, i came to make some lyrics hey boys, do you like these parties?
I know, i rhyme like a dagger cut now, then leave a mark after
Did i rap battle correctly
Doq Level 6 CPU
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Subject: Re: The rhyming thread. Mon Jun 16, 2014 9:57 pm
ah hem
Ok I'm back, jack Don't mess with me, I hack. No not that hack as in breakin lacks or breakin backs or breakin rats! I have a unique style The style that I posess is kinda wild But don't be afraid of my 8 mile Run. But don't run. Mind blowing percentile.
Gamey DJ Level 6 CPU
705 nah
Subject: Re: The rhyming thread. Mon Jun 16, 2014 10:00 pm
@johnny I dont know lemme ask my mom. She says you did alright, but she also would like to meet you and wonders if your white. (wtf mom)
Johnny64
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Subject: Re: The rhyming thread. Mon Jun 16, 2014 10:05 pm
@Gamey DJ Well, i do am white but why she wanna know that? i would meet her but im way too far (no disrespect)
Gamey DJ Level 6 CPU
705 nah
Subject: Re: The rhyming thread. Mon Jun 16, 2014 10:16 pm
I dont know, but she does get around a lot sorry if this offends but i thinks she thinks ur hot?
WOA WOA DONT RESPOND THIS IS A JOKE, but its not like your into banging old folk.
Or maybe you are its not my decision by the way kirbs ur rappin is like a vision
Johnny64
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Subject: Re: The rhyming thread. Thu Jun 19, 2014 2:08 pm
Reviving dem thread something I do Gamey Dee-Jay you should do it too!
By the way Thanks for the compliment? I don't know what was that but i'll take that comment
I don't like bangin but i will say standin thanks for the offer but you shouldn't bother
Gamey DJ Level 6 CPU
705 nah
Subject: Re: The rhyming thread. Thu Jun 19, 2014 3:38 pm
Wow, this topic has fallen and it can't get up. This place is more empty than the country with the world cup.
We need something to spice it up. Something with pizzazz. How about a little rap competition or commonly known as..
A rap battle. Yeah. This could be a lot of fun. Someone with vocab. skills, please show how its done.
(Yeah im pretty much getting desperate at this point )
Slissith
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Subject: Re: The rhyming thread. Thu Jun 19, 2014 4:16 pm
Ya called? I hear y'all this could be a lot of fun Disturbing I find your of flow lack
Call me yoda second eminem echo montoya ini-go
You didn't kill my father not my mother yet I'm gonna bring you down half a round no doubt
Here's a hot verse why don't you choke on the truth John will not save you expect no truce
I'm like Voldemort after me you'll rot use my wand kill a rat RATATATATAT
and so the story goes I buried a body no shame though you crossed me buddy
SP
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Subject: Re: The rhyming thread. Thu Jun 19, 2014 6:08 pm
Gamey, I cannot update my roster, for my computer is at home, not with me you see so while you guys are here to prosper, I sit and type this on my phone while I pee
Gamey DJ Level 6 CPU
705 nah
Subject: Re: The rhyming thread. Thu Jun 19, 2014 6:53 pm
Yo SP then heres my apology. I now feel bad for my actions. I will cry in the corner of walmart and watch people's reactions.